Renegade

Renegade

A Poem by Ency Bearis
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Inspired by Ernest Hemingway 6 words prose poem. A sort of Micropoetry.

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she enamored
my emotion
then departed


Ency Bearis
All Rights Reserved 2013

© 2013 Ency Bearis


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Ency Bearis
A Micropoetry

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Good...and I counted an even four syllables to each line...nicely formed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this...Didnt know about the six word prose form...nicely done Ency:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ency Bearis

10 Years Ago

Thanks SyberRose.
well worded very good

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is different from all of your works...especially in the theme. This is about betrayal which is I think your first piece with this negative subject. Akala ko po, all about fun and love lang concepts nyo. Hehe. But it's an awesome poem. Though it is too short, the thought is complete and the emotion is fully revealed by those 6 words.
Good job po!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ency Bearis

10 Years Ago

Thanks Daisie for reading this. I do had some concept like this and some spiritual poems too. I'll s.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

You're welcome po. I'll wait for those poems to be posted here.
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Pax
wow ~ i haven't read any works of hemingway, but i heard his a great author in america.... poet pala sya..di ko alam..hehe

wow ~ again ;D ~ I'm always amaze on how our brian processed such poetry with very short verses ~ that is why i love haiku ~ and this is no different from a haiku ~ it's depth and profoundness is vast like the pic of the ocean...

~ in this i see a story ~ only a woman can stirred a wavelenght of emotion from a man!
100~



Posted 10 Years Ago


Ency Bearis

10 Years Ago

Thanks William ( pax) for the comments. Actually Ernest Hemingway was an author and journalist. Most.. read more
Pax

10 Years Ago

most welcome sir... thanks for the info...

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Added on May 26, 2013
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Ency Bearis
Ency Bearis

Las Vegas, NV



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My profession is in Medical Field as a Registered Nurse, not a professional writer. It happened that I just like the land of words - The World Of Poetry. Being my hobby is inclined to Poetry, I publi.. more..

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