YOUR IM-PERFECTIONS

YOUR IM-PERFECTIONS

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo
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WHAT MARK SAYS/THINKS ABOUT ME. I TURNED HIS WORDS INTO POETRY :)

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Pictures deleated because of your smile,
you hate how your front teeth seem to stick out.
I wish you smiled more then once in awhile,
It makes you you, and its cute without a doubt.

 

You hate your strech marks oh so much,
its so very unatractive you say.
You stress and wish they'd go away,
To me your skin is perfect with every touch.

 

You say your putting on a little weight,
Although you cant put your chocolate down.
To me your bodys perfect with nothing to hate,
I think your just being a clown.

 

You seem to find so much to pick on, so many folts and flaws,
You should give yourself a break your beautiful, I still can't belive im yours.
You look at all the bad forgeting all the good,
If only you saw yourself the way I do, oh I wish you could.

 

Because you call all these things imperfections without a secound thought,
but to me you couldnt be any more perfect, your priceless you cant be brought.

 

© 2014 cimmy wuv xxxooo


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awww babe this is great...thats right ur perfect to me no matter how much u hate things bout urself...those things dont matter...it doesnt make me love u anymore or any less :) well done for putting my words into a poem lol you can do anything with ur writing ur amazing :) i love the write babe well done :) i love you and ill see you tonight xxxooo

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

mark

6 Years Ago

hehe :) ur welcome i love you more xxxooo
mark

6 Years Ago

hehe :) ur welcome i love you
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

awwww thanks hun i got it the first time thought :"P



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the most wonderful poem I've ever read on this premise yet. such a lovely read :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Awwww thank you so much :) that means allot :)
Effector Prime

6 Years Ago

you're all the more welcome my friend :)
awww babe this is great...thats right ur perfect to me no matter how much u hate things bout urself...those things dont matter...it doesnt make me love u anymore or any less :) well done for putting my words into a poem lol you can do anything with ur writing ur amazing :) i love the write babe well done :) i love you and ill see you tonight xxxooo

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

mark

6 Years Ago

hehe :) ur welcome i love you more xxxooo
mark

6 Years Ago

hehe :) ur welcome i love you
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

awwww thanks hun i got it the first time thought :"P
So very sweet hun, you did a wonderful job with this one :) x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Thank you hun :)
We dont see the imperfections in the body of those we love

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Yes this is true :)Thank you for your review :)
Awwww, sooo sweeeet!!!
One of your best poems for sure. Glad you found somebody as great as Mark :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Awww thank you Anna :) You think so really?
Thank you im glad to :)
annabellee

6 Years Ago

yeah i do think so, you're most welcome :)
A beautiful poem. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This poem is as beautiful as Mark finds you my friend. Beauty, we are all beautiful in our way especially when someone loves us. Those little imperfections may seem like magnifying glass attractions to us, but to another they are invisible for his love for you can see nothing of the sort. Beautifully penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Awww thank you for your wonderful review :)
This is true :)
You are beautiful inside and out Cimmy, and I am so glad that you have found the person to tell you this when you are feeling insecure. Lovely write hun :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Awww thank you hun you are a sweetheart :) Thank you for your review mwa xxxooo
Laura Harrison

6 Years Ago

Any time; I love reading your work :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

awwww I love reading your work to, I like your new chapters :)
I really love this hun :) He know what he sees in you and to me it seems as if he is in love with you no matter what. He loves everything about you and those are rare and hard to find. Such a great write :) its going in my favorites


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Awww thank you hun your review was beautiful, as are you :)
We get our inspiration to write fr.. read more
Soren

6 Years Ago

this is true
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

what that its as beautiful as you are, yeah i know its true thats why i said it :P
OH you mean.. read more

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cimmy wuv xxxooo

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Hey everyone im cimmonne (prounced simone) but everyone i know and love calls me cimmy. I'm unique and different and 100 percent me. I have a passion for writing and i want to share my writing with ev.. more..

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