BLACK HOLE, PURE SOUL!!!

Black hole pure soul,
Feelings taking to much of a toll.
Happiness out of reach,
Life sucked out of me like a leech.

Pure soul black hole,
Heart black as cole.
At the end of that tunnel, i cant see the light,
I cant find anymore reason to fight.

Soul pure hole black,
Theres so much in my life i lack
Amazes me im not on crack,
I don't know that theres any coming back.

Hole black soul pure,
All this heartache iv injured.
All the pain all the tears,
Surcum to all my fears,
Standing still all these years.

Black hole pure soul,
Sick of living this roll.
Time ticks on, it doesnt slow down,
My lifes the joke, im the clown.

HOLES dug to deep, im already in my grave,
To the darkness im in its prison, im its slave.
BLACK that color sourounds me its what iv become,
Feeling smaller then the last little bread crumb.

SOUL pure and innocent, is mine he said,
Maybe thats the reason ill wind up dead.
PURE-LY a disappointment i seem to be,
Ill never live up to whats expected of me.

Hole so black i set it alight,
Hoping it would burn bright.
But its passionate blaze caught my soul on fire,
As it burns, my soul screams in a painfilled choir.

Reviews

[Jibey]

This poem vents well feeling of despair and frustration. The black hole and the soul are neatly linked by rhyme and the repetition drives home the metaphor of the black hole. A spell-checker wouldn't come amiss.. but only a pedant would worry too much as the words have a life of their own, stemming from your brimming feelings and bursting imagination.

To hell with what others say - even though it hurts. Just fly your own flag, girl, and be what you are!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks darl, yer i have been in a really dark place :(