CAPITAL CRISIS!!!

When TRYING becomes to late or it isnt enough,
When CRYING is almost a nomal daily routeen.
When TALKING doesnt make it any less tough,
And LIFE is just dead grass with so little green.

When LOVE seems to hurt you more then you thought it could,
When HATE becomes a way bigger part of your life then it should.
When DEPRESSION fights that hard it isnt fair,
When HAPPINESS becomes way to f*****g rare.

When BREATHING becomes a need not a want,
When DEPENDENCE is like the only invented font.
When you have seemed to have LOST your way,
And all you want is to FIND your place to stay.

When a HOME is something that you seek,
When a FUTURE seems quite bleak.
When a JOB seems so impossible your in despair.
When HOPE becomes so small its now hardly even there.

When the WHO becomes WHO?
When the WHAT becomes WHAT?
When the WHERE becomes WHERE?
When the WHY becomes WHY?
The WHEN becomes WHEN?
F**k knows the HOW?

When QUESTIONS become unanswered,
and I become unsure,
When CONFUSION and MEMORY problems are all im good for.
I sit here and want to GIVE UP, but i cant,
So whats even the point in this stupid rant?

Will it make me feel better?
In my life will i find a point?
Or will i cover my scars with that sweater?
And one day give into smoking a joint.

Will i eventually loose CONTROL?
Will i ever feel like im WHOLE?
Will there be all these things I MISS?
I wonder id theres a way out of THIS....

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is moving as we’ve all had one or several of these moments months or years it is the human condition to experience these things but if someone experiencing them day in day out and no joy to go with it then a sad thing indeed! Well done I liked this you got the message across it’s like a plea for help a rant a rave but hopefully the writer comes out of it feeling released and stronger from it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im hoping it can change soon,and i can write something happy. Thank u

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is an heartfelt poem. A poem about time of confusion, higgledy-piggledy, doubt and sometimes obscurity.
Every question has an answer but the problem is that nobody knows which answer is right.
We should just keep hoping for a better time when our questions would be rightly answered from above.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much for this review :)

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

My pleasure...

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes it just goes that way. Your mood reflects what you are going through at that particular time. Moods will influence our writing. Moods can interfere with relationships. They need working through. You can't turn into happy at the flick of a switch if you are feeling sad. Work with what you've got cimmy. That was how your lines spoke to me but I may be way off track.

Chris

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your not way of track darl. Thanks for the support, and the review

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you cimmy. Always good to read you.

Chris

[NotUsinganymore]

Very philosophical poem. I enjoyed it a loy and I liked the meaning. Some do not know how to go on with life.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for your review :)