My Spirit

One day some one challenged me. They said I will give you 10 words, I want you to write a poem. This is what I came up with.

My Spirit


Chill from the wind of death. Ice cold, Rebirth, and warmth like the spring. My spirit awakens
Essence of life and love. 

Ice-cold days melted away from the heat of nourished love. Like a blanket of warmth.

Mother, I am no longer dormant. Earth not my cave any longer, but now my castle.

Sunless days melted away by the warmth of this mother's heart.

Fly over me, Spread brighter then a rainbow.
Covered, protected My blanket of Sunshine.

I kiss life like a snowman and yet I love with a nourished heart.

Reviews

[Riding the Rainbow]

touching piece...........

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you for your time in reading my poem.

[A. Amos]

interesting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[The Vintage Nail]

Hello A. Amos Thank you for your comment. Enjoy your weekend

[A. Amos]

You yoo my friend, love the way you write always

[The Vintage Nail]

A. Amos, you are precious and thoughtful with honesty in your opinion and I love it. Thank you

[Wuji]

There is something alluring about this piece, that something so cold could be so warm, a play of opposites and the triumph of the heart through whatever obstacles or changes life brings. I read it many times, because it's a different and I liked how the piece had overtures, after-tastes and strange sentiments that matched nature with feeling.

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you so very much for such a well thought review. Very much appreciated.

[Chris]

I wonder what were the ten words you were supposed to use?

[The Vintage Nail]

1. Rebirth
2. Spirit
3.Blanket
4. Rainbow
5. Sunshine
6. Doormat
7. Cave
8. nourished
9. chill
10. Essence

[Chris]

Impressive...

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you :-)

[Scott Metro]

A lovely write....let that spirit soar..!!!!

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you scott, much appreciation for the review.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...Bravo.................

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you so much for your comment.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[topsyturvy]

"Earth not my cave any longer, but my castle" wow that was amazing right there, and yet as I read on, more words and stanzas became so much more. I read it again as a whole and it was beautiful :)

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you for your review. I am glad you enjoyed it and glad I shared it so someone like you could feel the words.

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I loved it smilessssssssssssssssssssss:)

[The Vintage Nail]

Thank you so much for the review.

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welcome:) dear writer

[The Vintage Nail]

thank you very much, I do appreciate anyone who takes time to read my writing. I myself hate to read, no no I love to read but I yawn so much when I do and that I can stand making it almost impossible to read. Not good when you want to be a writer, lol. No worries I will always take the time to read and review, especially when someone took the time for me. Thank you again

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Lol your welcome :) everything comes in its own time:) but your truly welcome, I don't ask for favors back because I read some1. I like my writing to linger in a breeze send its own message :)

[The Vintage Nail]

It's not a favor, u did not ask but its called consideration and it's just nice for people to leave at best a comment. When you give to the universe you get back. Kindness never killed anyone. Why the expression "kill them with kindness" is real when it's not true, lol. Did you ever hear of someone dying from kindness? Any way thank you

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Smilessssssssssss I understand you:)