Old Man Crow

When dead is the day's light
in the shadow of night
beware of Old Man Crow
into your veins he can flow
when you see his black withered shape
from a black death you cannot escape
his soul is as black as wicked sin
this blackness will flow deep within
poisoning your soul until death
Old Man Crow will steal your life breath
he will leave an undead body behind
you will be trapped in its poisoned mind
to move again nevermore
dead visions and thoughts to bore
he will search for more victims to bleed
you can help ease his soul stealing need
if he draws near eternal death you will know
beware of Old Man Crow

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. It was amazing. I thought it was cool. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Daniel Gardner]

This poem rocks. It made me feel as if Old Man Crow is out to get me. Nice job.

[HorrorMaster]

creepy, very good

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot kind of told like a spooky campfire tale..overall a very creepy piece..nice work!!!

[Star Wolf]

Creepy and scary!

[Tina Kline]

One scary ManMonster. Creepy! Good job on this.