Magic Flame

Coming in through her windows
an early Autumn wind blows
a candle flickers in the breeze
magically it stays lit to please
its pretty glow lights up her room
chases away the gloom
she gazes at the flame
she doesn't feel the same
the shadows disappear
a kind magic is near
it glows for her
inside she finds laughter
she has a magical friend
the magic will never end
the candle is there to please her
its soothing warmth flickering forever.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A lovely write :))

[Rose of Gondor]

Hypnotic and dreamy. :) MAGICAL!!!!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is very surreal and hypnotic. I felt like I was being pulled into a misty dream. This is truly good writing. I give it 100.

[Susie Q]

A lovely write, Ghost. A flame might bring certain magic, whether a candle or a fireplace as it dances for us and maybe even bring calm to a weary soul.

[Black Cat Fever]

Makes me think of someone who is very sad and lonely and creates a magical friend. Very bittersweet and sad. I love this!

[Star Wolf]

Very strange and mysterious this flame. Magic for sure. An awesome write!

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful artwork. This reads like a fantasy story, something mysterious about the candle and its flame. I think you did an outstanding job on this. You write very well.

[Marie Harrison]

Awe...love this. I loved my fireplace. Used it all of the time. Now I have none, so candles are glowing instead! Love my candles. Fabulous poem!