motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you ( love senryu)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto


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top gear ... don't blow the engine !

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you , Stella..will try not to.
j.
Mmmm....I wasn't a fan of love write ups until I'd reached here in wc....
But am loving the love poems a lot now!

These three lines are fervently penned...hope you'll catch your love soon....Oh! You might have already done that and enjoying life with her ;)
Be blessed :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind review, Tahsin...
j.
Even in the beginning you were a love machine...go figure ;p

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

maybe poetically speaking....but not otherwise...ha ha.....but thanks.
j.
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I love senryu too
and this one was exemplary
full throttle my friend

N

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you, N.
j.
Neville

2 Years Ago

Again, my pleasure entirely jacob, N
Mucho desire.
Sensational senryu!

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you Frank....
j.
Those are the words i would love to say to my doctor.
With the footnote. Where do i go to get it done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

i hear you, Paul....
love that response...the doctor, our body's mechanic...

j.. read more
Sounds more like pent up lust Jacob!
Love the short form packed with metaphors.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, John.
j.
Erin,
Motoring toward you (love senryu). What a happy lighthearted write! I just sat here and felt it's lighthearted message and had to just grin! Thanks for the happy little time in my day. "trapped in a two wheel body: You really gave us all a fantastic poem here! blessings Kathy

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

and thank you Kathy....appreciate your words.

j.
ahahahaha what a fine senryu for my morning ..bubbles up the chuckling from me belly :)
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, E.

somehow this one got resurrected much to my surprise...thank you for yo.. read more
Ah, that feeling of spinning the wheels when you want to lay rubber, then stalling out when you dump the clutch. Nicely done, j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

yes, i have stalled out enough times...even though i do a clutch pretty well.

thanks,.. read more

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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