motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you ( love senryu)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto


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You more of the Harley type I thought
A bit of a loner with a side car in case
Great write

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

that side car holds fun people.
thank you, Julie,
j.
Jacob,

Most profoundly thought provoking and meditatively contemplative in subtlety's all too true realities ...

Marve

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Marve,
j.
4 wheel desire, 2 wheel speed.
I'd say that's about right. These things should be savoured, not rushed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Can't believe it has been almost 8 years since I wrote this one...thanks for bringing it back to lif.. read more
Ciara

1 Year Ago

It was my pleasure. I'm glad I found it. 🙂🖤
Sometimes we really need to try to kick in the other gear and get motoring. Nice write. ~Jim

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your words, Jim,
j.
My thoughts here J, are the mind is willing, but the flesh is weak or maybe it's the other way round the flesh is willing but the mind is weak. Whatever, love is strange and it can't be engineered.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

I like that, Chris...it can't be engineered...
so true,
thank you,
j.
Love moves the world and becomes all-terrain, against its standard stock and often without regard for all and sunder. Powerful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Fredrick,
j.
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Ada
Double meaning here, since this could be a bike or it could be erotica; the writer is left to ponder...title is also love senyru so. Interesting

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your read and words, Ada,
j.
That, my friend, is why I prefer mountain bikes and woodland trails. Love is best found off the beaten path.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

in places we never expect, thank you, M.J.
j.
Nice! --- But you're going to have to let the clutch out sooner or later. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

afraid so, thank you, JE,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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