going paperless

 

going paperless

 

 

 

i garner abstract energy

of thought

 

so just imagine

a poem

 

being written

in your mind.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/11/16

Reviews

[Cassie]

I saw this title, and I was like what does this guy want to say below and I am glad i read. You always have a way of getting me back to the track when i reach writers block

[jacob erin-cilberto]

glad i could help a bit, Cassie...and thank you for visiting and your kind words.

j.

[alifeacoustic]

Wow Jacob. Such depth and meaning with so few words. I am impressed Sir.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, alife.

j.

[Érenn]

Well honestly I think i can relate with this one quite easily. Some of my most cherished works were already written on my mind before I even started writing on the paper. Loved the abstract energy you have shared here. Already helping me for sure. ^^ I just consider myself lucky that I am able to retain most of the things I have written in my mind ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your sharing how you relate to this piece, Errenn..

j.

[Jon Roggie]

A poem ever changing, growing with each stimuli.
Nice one.
Jon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jon.

j.

[maricoona91]

This is nice. I like how you put spaces inbetween lines.
It would be nice to get to the core of poetry, think about what it is beyond the words. Words are just symbols anyway.
Nice and interesting thoughts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they really are symbols...i agree...and all put together give us a theme to feel, much more than just read.

thank you for your words!

j.

[Corset]

I think of things all the time, then discard or forget as soon as i have a moment to sit down then my mind is blank!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

me too...thank you for your words...

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

I love it. I know that's not really a review. HMMM, let's see -- the abstract nature of the poem really makes the reader think.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, KL...

:))))

[andrew mitchell]

I can only imagine the overlap of poems interfused. A great concept, a good poem as per norm with a dash of the profound!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, andrew.

j.

[B. Boileau]

If only my memory would allow it. Thank god for cocktail napkins !
Your abstract energy is well appreciated my friend.

b

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, bill...

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Unfortunately, I write them in my mind often...and then they vanish! You, my friend, have oodles of abstract energy. Your poetry continues to prove this. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lydi...
j.