a room with a view

a room with a view


synergy lengthens the synapse
spaces of the heart allow for rental

the vacancy subdued
feelings co-exist

love finds its lodging
within both of us

the tab paid to infinity
room service delivering

the menu written with eternal dreams
of peace.



erin-cilberto    
12/5/16

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

"...the tab paid to infinity,,," properly assesses the ultimate cost. Am quite unfamiliar, however, with "eternal dreams of peace."
This poem is, no doubt, complex and laced with meaningful metaphors.
My "room," unfortunately, appears to have a much drearier view.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and many rooms do, Jimmy, many rooms do.
thank you for your thoughts on this piece..

j.

[ms. barrie]

wonderful word weaving depicting doors//hearts opened and one falling into the serenity of true love and harmony...when all is in balance -- sweet sentiments
penned ---
thank you for sharing
❁♡☺︎ ~ b

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, barrie...

j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Love comes, finds its lodging, and life moves forward once again. Peace for the heart to be found in dreams. Good write, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Ted.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

When a person is alone, he or she often rents out a spot of the heart to the wrong tenant. Dreams can write the menu, but will the cook prepare the meal? That is the question. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your reply is better than the poem...thank you for the smile...

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Jacob....I just ran with your words.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha j,

This one sounds like a nice description for new love...

Sweet!

Alisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Alisa...

appreciate your extended visit, very much.

j.

[Alisa Js]

You are very welcome. I enjoyed it.

Alisa

[KTizzle]

I really love the first two lines where it says, "synergy lengthens the synapse/spaces of the heart allow for rental." It makes me think of human connection and how people need/rely on one another.

I love the emphasis on "love" as the filler of this desire for synergies. It makes me think of agape love because that is often associated with the idea of "eternal dreams of peace."

Thanks for posting! Have a great day!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Jazz Lover...

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This should be your letter to Santa this year...a room of love, peace, and magic! Magnificent!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

would he bring to me on his sled? then i will send it to him.
thanks, Queenie.

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I believe....