elements in jigsaw motion

elements in jigsaw motion

 

 

when the chemistry withers

evicts itself to hither then yon

 

i will rest against your heart,

hoping the dissolution

retains a warm solution

within my breast,

 

an agent to buffer the dissolving---

one to keep us solving

the puzzle

 

that is us.

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/22/17

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

Funny how we move forward in a pattern of ups and downs and side to sides and miss the ying and yang involved. May be we'd get bogged down otherwise. Good write, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ted.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

We are always wondering whether all the pieces will fit as we ramble down the puzzle of life.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, we are, Al...yes we are.

j.

[Hebe]

Truly amazing poem.... you express true devotion so eloquently! loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Hebe...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Brilliant j, how we come together as different salts and love is the medium.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for this comment...it is so true. We must come together.
j.

[DIVYA]

You have given words to those feeling and hopes that are often contained within the soul, finding no words. Brilliant and soul searching poetry, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kindness, DIVYA...
j.

[MsJewel]

I love the warmth in this one Jacob. Your talent never ceases to amaze me :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Julie.
j.

[Miss Sharon]

Wowser! This is a beautiful write Jacob...as are ALL of your poems! Bravissimo. ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sharon, for your kind words.
j.

[Lyn Anderson]

There are those relationships that require buffering agents.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insight, Lyn.
j.

[Ken Simm.]

You are the writer who disects thoughts, relationships. You are the artist who can see the dilemmas of the human soul and produce art from them. I remain your envious fan.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so kind...and coming from a writer who writes with the depth and beauty you do..such a compliment...thank you, Ken.
j,.

[JayceeC]

And isn't this what we all hope for in a relationship? That the foundation is strong enough to withstand the dissolution of chemistry that brought us together. Hopefully the bonds are covalent and many things shared.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your insights, Jaycee...thank you for your words...good to see you around WC again.
j.