leaving a dowry of destruction

leaving a dowry of destruction

 

coward clouds retreat

roaring winds elope in fear

marriage of a storm

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/1/17

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

You sure don't want to be around when mother nature gets upset.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nope, we have no chance against her----
thank you, Paul.

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

A striking metaphor eloquently framed.
Not sure if this is senryu or haiku; do know it's excellent.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy---appreciate your words.
j.

[Tom]

The weather inclement or otherwise, is no respecter of class, creed, carpenter or King, dimiss its power at your peril!

Creative and thoughtful brevity Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Tom.
j.

[Bacchus]

yes, there are certain
circumstances that only
promise destruction...
wise not to chose those paths...
hard enough to endure when
nature occurs.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and nature just does its thing, regardless...
the unstoppable force.
thank you for your words, Bacchus.
j.

[Tony Jordan]

Let's hope any more weddings are held at sea.
Great word choices Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tony.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

The perfect storm. Imperfectly, unfeelingly destroying. Your strong words condemn the monstrous marriage of volatile elements- and hopefully speed them back to hell. Kudos!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Annette.
j.

[Ana B.]

Marriages of storms give birth to raw materials for us the poets....the bittersweet circle of life....lovely sad song of words and thoughts dear Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Ana...thank you for your words,
j.

[Stella Armour]

Hot a very pleasant dowry to bestow on the world , and certainly not a match made in heaven...this has been hellish for all concerned :(

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it has....thank you, Stella...
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Filled with descriptive metaphors that tell the tale of a raging storm that swept in wrecking havoc and then moved on leaving destruction that is unimaginable. Lovely choice of words and images Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your review, John...
j.