the nearness of you

the nearness of you

 

 

approximate lips

navigate toward connection

the angle of love

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/17/17

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful chemistry when there's that strong passionate connection there seems to be a magnetic pull because you want to kiss and hold them ever so gentle, nicely penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Benita...
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A physiological exchange of passion – neatly encapsulated in a short write – excellent! :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you Phill.

j.

[Norman 223]

Osculatory contact
Requires precision
But then finally hits gold.

We all aim for it Jacob.
N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Norman

j.

[Fran Marie]

Aim with precision .. hopefully the right love connection is made .. nicelnicely penned..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Fran Marie.
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The anticipation when going in for that kiss is intoxicating. Great one Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nothing like a good kiss....to me it is the most intimate thing.
thanks Dale.
j.

[h d e rushin]

going fishing this morning with a buddy who hates fishing. But I sense that he needed someone to talk to since his wife left. Love, like listening is that old school opsimathy that wisdom searches out from the soul of others. In high school when Shirl stuck her tongue down my throat in the school gymnasium, it was mostly misdirected as young love is. But somehow our lips found each others in the dark with nothing but our pubescent passion for navigation. All I can san is, keep holding on to the lore of culture my friend, because we will all eventually find ourselves having to love one another sooner than later...

great poem....dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your story...and it reminded me of my first real kiss...actually there were several at the time...we liked practicing...
thank you, dana.

j.

[Corset]

trajectories XD it's hit or miss. Love this , for some reason in makes me think of when babies hug or kiss how the aim might not be practiced and you might get slobber in the eye, lol.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

bad aim.....love that ....
thanks Corset....you made me smile, big time.
j.

[Corset]

glad to be able to do that still

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not sure I detect romance as it is rarely approximate. Perhaps unrequited Jacob? A definite thinker for me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting reply, John....
lots of near misses...
appreciate your pondering.
j.

[DIVYA]

With its inbuilt compass and sensors it navigates surely towards its treasured goal...so cleverly said Mr. Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insight, DIVYA--

j.

[DIVYA]

It was such a pleasure!