8 drenched lines

8 drenched lines

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

8 drenched lines

 

 

there is a sort of blue leaning

in your eyes

as we part lips

and I walk into the rain swept memory

 

that will hold me

until your rainbow

peeks into my sky

once again.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/8/13

© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto


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this is simply exquisite...your amazing dictation, searing talent for penning such profound beauty is always a feast upon the reader’s senses.
thank you for sharing...
barrie


Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your very kind review, barrie.
j.
miss. barrie

2 Years Ago

you’re welcome, jacob (:
gripping love

wow!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you , marilyn.
j.
Lovely bit of work.
"Until we meet, again" far more beautifully said.
Be waitin' on that rainbow!


Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you, Jimmy..

j.
sounds like she's still got you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bacchus

2 Years Ago

Rainbows are the perfect combination of heartache and hope
jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

it's true...they always have two meanings.
breath held in hope that is hopeless as a heart holds on to the warmth it tasted once a time ago, sad and poignant.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your poetic reply , John.
j.
Makes me think of sunshine and warmth and hope. Rainbows are beautiful, especially when they arise in clear, rainswept skies.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

yes, they are...thank you, DIVYA...you are a kind poet...
j.
until your rainbow
peeks into my sky
once again.

Ah...that's some line Jacob :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you Galadriel....

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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