intimate cursive...

intimate cursive...

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

intimate cursive...

 

 

Sadistic kisses,

my lips are masochistic

so torture me till dawn

let me taste the blood of bad intention

i will bathe in it

and your aura, even as my mouth bleeds 

words of endearment,

 

and my breath vacillates     

before the cut of the tongue

tells me you are leaving

and i ask for a napkin

to wipe the blood

 

spilled from my 

wounded pen

that loved every 

beautifully agonizing moment

of osculation

with yours.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/10/19

© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto


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I see the author of these lines totally captivated under the spell of another. Relishing each moment "that loved each beautifully agonising moment of oscillation with yours". Could be another writer, or the author's muse. I felt some yearning and intensity here. The title tells me that also.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

thank you for your insightful words, Chris

j.
Very descriptive these captivating words that play with the readers imagination. Real impact there! thanks for sharing Jacob!

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

thank you for your words, kitty,
j.
This has a Poeish feel to it, a macabre tone as the torture chamber and the bloodied scene are portrayed in an allegory of a relationship that was failing then ended. Love the image of the curves meeting like bodies.

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review, John,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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