tears freeze

tears freeze

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


tears freeze

 

 

a father's imprint

impaled upon my cold heart

but respect's still warm

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/12/19

© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto


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A reminder that they're always within us .a beautiful warmth to cherish

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

thank you for your words, Fran,
j.
A father's imprint will always keep a cold heart warm, j.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

thank you, gram,
j.
The sadness from never getting Over the loss of one’s father.

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

thank you, andrew,
j.
I really felt the power and warmth of this.

Take care - Dave

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Months Ago

thank you, Dave,
j.
I love the use of impaled. That tells me how much you loved your Dad, and although your own heart is cold with the loss of loves, he still warms you. This piece tells this reader much about you. Excellent senryu Jacob.

Chris

Posted 12 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

12 Months Ago

thank you, Chris...
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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