My warped and fragile little mind may be broken, but this reads as watching a surfer in the sea and perhaps makes complete sense regarding the dangers of being online, or is that just the cynic in me?
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
i like that viewpoint, Lorry....the online thing...yes, i like that.
j.
Some are so foolhardy. Do not understand their own mortality. Blinkered when it comes to danger. Can you hear my screaming at him? He doesn't head the warning. He is minced meat.
Chris
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
i heard, Chris...
thanks for trying to save him.
j.
Good one here, J.
Sometimes we hasten towards danger obliviously, thinking we are catching the wave.
Only if we could see what lies ahead of every step we take.
nice one jacob ..best surfing i have ever done .. :) its all about the danger and the rush .. your senryu is well thought out says i .. delivers an experience i might only dream of .. pretty sure with all the shark weeks on TV i would be pre-wary, however ..great read for me sir!
E.
I have on many occasions been within a few feet of those things:) with a lovely glass barrier mind you. Tho once when wading near the shore one little shark swam between my legs:( I prefer the barrier!
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
I prefer the glass as well...does it protect the heart, though?
not sure.
thank you, b.. read moreI prefer the glass as well...does it protect the heart, though?
not sure.
thank you, bunny...
j.
Do not Venture near the Pipeline...actually the Chantays did it first...but we shouldn't jump the shark here.
Can a guy be that unaware of what is going on? Or, are women more practiced at being devious...although, I don't remember women circling my barstool with hungry eyes. I guess the repellant I used was very effective. ;>p
Good one, j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
love your reply....yes, Chantays first, then Ventures...
Chantays, one hit wonder...great son.. read morelove your reply....yes, Chantays first, then Ventures...
Chantays, one hit wonder...great song though...i miss the old days and all of the instrumentals.
thank you for the smile, Ted,
j.
4 Years Ago
Hard to find good guitar instrumentals nowadays...kids don't know what they're missing.
4 Years Ago
no kidding..."Apache" "Telstar"...."Walk Don't Run"
"Red River Rock"---and on and on and on.
of course, "Pulp Fiction" introduced a world of young people to Dick Dale & Miserlou.
4 Years Ago
(bunny interruption)
I have been listening to William Tyler recently speaking of guitar instr.. read more(bunny interruption)
I have been listening to William Tyler recently speaking of guitar instrumentals:)
4 Years Ago
I listened to a bit of William Tyler today, an exceptional talent.
yum yum eat em up.... er… I mean, faster faster surfer, danger below... and to take this poem as metaphor, and 'deeper" (yep pun intended), isn't is true that often in our lives we do not see the hidden dangers as we go merrily along thinking everything is okay.... like surf's up dude....
loved the senyru, but I must admit you now have me looking over my shoulder and under beds etc... ;0)
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
thank you for your kind review...and sorry to have you looking under the bed...:)
j.
Love this watery grave senryu Jacob. Can see the poor schmuck leaving the pipe straight into the jaws! As an allegory women are indeed as dangerous lol!
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..