beneath the blond bonnet (a senryu)

beneath the blond bonnet   ( a senryu)

 

 

the wig is crooked

the enigma gone awry

toupee-d words are lies

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/23/19

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

sometimes the facade mirrors the person so very well... I can not imagine the internal rumblings that can allow for such self love when looking pon his own reflection tis a testament to the mind I say wicked funny Jacob:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words...bunny...

j.

[andrew mitchell]

I thought this was going to be a blond joke lol but this has connotations of something maybe political.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

perhaps...thank you, andrew,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I must have a one track mind because however I looked at this I could only see Mr Trump with his hair flying at half mast. I am smiling Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha..thank you, Chris.
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Even bad TV shows can make it to the big stage. let us apprentice ourselves to making it better.

Good one, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...thank you, Ted,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A contrast to the fishy tale of shark this left me feeling it was about someone who tries to be something they are not but doing it badly. Definitely a thinking piece.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John....appreciate your words.
j.