Person of Interest

Person of Interest

she caught my attention with her sway

eyes of interrogation

we asked each other questions

without uttering a syllable of sound

an ellipsis smile

spoke volumes

i blinked

she moved on

a mystery in waiting

after the moment's imbue

should i pursue?

erin-cilberto

11/16/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing ventured nothing gained. If you don't pursue the opportunities that come your way, at a later date you may regret it. Sometimes a look is enough. A scenario easily pictured on your words Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...yes, sometimes it is.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Drifting into top shelf scenario, silent words kissing the stars, please run into her arms!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Al,
j.

[Cassie]

You should pursue, the topic drew my attention. Jacob you never disappoint

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Cassie,
j.

[Fran Marie]

I like the word..ellipsis used here.this is .very neat write and yes; I think you should

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Fran,
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

You're asking the wrong guy; any good moves I've ever made have been by mistake.
Beautifully portrayed, prof!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think i am in the same boat, Jimmy. Thanks...
j.

[Desert Knave]

For some reason I am seeing the narrator decked out as Sam Spade. Very cool write. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a little Humphrey Bogart...thank you, Jim.
j.

[Anjeline]

Interesting piece. It really has a cool , story kind of format which is really fun to read. Very nice work. Also I loved the use of "ellipses" .
:)

[DIVYA]

I’d say go for it :)
One can never be too sure but to me, the ellipsis smile and interrogating eyes seem to tilt the balance in your favour.

So nicely written, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Those chance encounters … a glance … a come hither smile … she turns away …
Do I pursue at the risk of my foolish pride?
Damn right man … life is short … what's a little more humiliation?

A good one j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and at our age, we have experienced enough humiliation to just shake it off and move on...
Pride? none of that left.
thank you, Ted...
j.