Oh my goodness, but there is so much left un-said here. What if she got the complete wrong end of the stick? Whatever secret he is holding is worth protection, worth the blushing.....
I have the sense that she is not quite as free and understanding of this situation as she feels...!
Laura.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
i think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads an.. read morei think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads and the kind words.
j.
I am picturing this in my head and I'm thinking, why is he giving up so easily. Is it a brief encounter or is it an encounter with a previous lover which is causing the blushing. Got me pondering here Jacob. Many possibilities.
Chris
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
thank you for pondering this one, Chris....it's open to go different ways....i like both ways you lo.. read morethank you for pondering this one, Chris....it's open to go different ways....i like both ways you looked at it.
j.
Oh my goodness, but there is so much left un-said here. What if she got the complete wrong end of the stick? Whatever secret he is holding is worth protection, worth the blushing.....
I have the sense that she is not quite as free and understanding of this situation as she feels...!
Laura.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
i think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads an.. read morei think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads and the kind words.
j.
seems he got the Royal smack down jacob ... i can see him standing there ..poor head held down low .. feeling bad ;{ but she is blushing! hmmmmmmmmm going to ponder this one ... i'm hooked i guess :)
E.
Thank you, E.
love to see where you go with this, sooner or later....when you come back to it.. read moreThank you, E.
love to see where you go with this, sooner or later....when you come back to it.
thanks for pondering...
i know, i got a little William Carlos Williams here...some Black Mountain abstract..
j.
4 Years Ago
i have no idea my friend ;) had to look up those references and must say i continue to be amazed wit.. read morei have no idea my friend ;) had to look up those references and must say i continue to be amazed with such an expansive background your years and choices have given you ... have to say again, jacob... glad you stick around and share here at the Cafe' ... really found Black Mountain an incredible story ... especially given the time period ... the revolution of the 60s not nearly so dramatic as i once thought in comparison ..
4 Years Ago
thank you, E.
I get so much back from this site from all of you...lots and lots of inspiratio.. read morethank you, E.
I get so much back from this site from all of you...lots and lots of inspiration to keep doing this writing thingy....
j.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..