Encounter

Encounter

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

 

Encounter

 

 

incrimination 

fool accepts his shortcomings

blushing, she goes free

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/2/19

© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto


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Oh my goodness, but there is so much left un-said here. What if she got the complete wrong end of the stick? Whatever secret he is holding is worth protection, worth the blushing.....
I have the sense that she is not quite as free and understanding of this situation as she feels...!
Laura.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

i think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads an.. read more
LauraKate

1 Month Ago

You're welcome.
Laura.



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I am picturing this in my head and I'm thinking, why is he giving up so easily. Is it a brief encounter or is it an encounter with a previous lover which is causing the blushing. Got me pondering here Jacob. Many possibilities.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you for pondering this one, Chris....it's open to go different ways....i like both ways you lo.. read more
Oh my goodness, but there is so much left un-said here. What if she got the complete wrong end of the stick? Whatever secret he is holding is worth protection, worth the blushing.....
I have the sense that she is not quite as free and understanding of this situation as she feels...!
Laura.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

i think you may be right about her...i like your take here, Laura,
thank you for the reads an.. read more
LauraKate

1 Month Ago

You're welcome.
Laura.
seems he got the Royal smack down jacob ... i can see him standing there ..poor head held down low .. feeling bad ;{ but she is blushing! hmmmmmmmmm going to ponder this one ... i'm hooked i guess :)
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you, E.
love to see where you go with this, sooner or later....when you come back to it.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

i have no idea my friend ;) had to look up those references and must say i continue to be amazed wit.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you, E.
I get so much back from this site from all of you...lots and lots of inspiratio.. read more

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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