secret

secret

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

 

secret

 

 

 

the ornery silence

exudes from unwritten words

a lack of spacing

huddled together in hushed harmony

 

the ones we never pen

and cannot imagine onto the page.

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/17/19

© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto


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Harmony?
Doesn't sound like harmony to me, maybe forced harmony.

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

yes, perhaps, forced.
thank you, Allie...
taking a break...be back eventually...
.. read more
Light and Ashes

5 Months Ago

I do my best..... thank you.
Once pen is put to paper, there are no secrets; although those wonderful poetical tools we so effectively hide behind, often serve to disguise the true meaning of a poet's words.

But I would have it no other way, for I find both great fascination and enjoyment in doing my best to interpret and understand what lies beneath the surface.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

thank you so much for getting this poet...I appreciate your words here, Beccy,
am taking a br.. read more
Beccy

6 Months Ago

enjoy your break; and make sure 'tis a break not a severance. :))
Powerful words and thoughts shared Jacob. I believe we cannot write down everything. Some blackness need to stay hidden. The unwritten words of Hemingway and Salinger showed the waste of war. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

and here we were reading and commenting on each other's work at exactly the same time...must be Karm.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

It is karma and you are welcome Jacob. Finally two days off in a roll. I can read and think.
Words that are never there--mystically described.
You portray their absence as if they were starkly present.
Quite a literary trick, Jacob!

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, Jimmy...
j.
I don’t know why but I feel like this has a ominous truth to it. It’s eloquent in its own nature. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind review, Nefertiti...
j.
Behind closed doors ...they say the 'Secret' remains but does it always. There are those who are impatient for those secret trysts to be set free to the detriment of parties concerned!

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, kitty,
j.
kitty

1 Year Ago

Don't mention!
“Ornery silence” is my favorite from this piece, J. They do seem to be the worst-tempered creatures, gnawing on our conscience, and they despise being caged. I suppose that’s why so few people can keep them.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind review, R.E.
j.
How do you wriggle your way into the words Jacob? You seem to be able to get to the core of what you are writing about with the minimum of words. Each one purposely selected. You must have an incredible knowledge of the English language. Very clever.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

i must confess, Marie-Louise...the words wriggle their way into me...i am just a conduit. I really d.. read more
To write, to express 'make believe' is one thing, one thing only.. it's putting words to thoughts. To divulge a secret either one's own or someone else's is tantamount to putting words to personal emotions and thus, disloyalty to human spirit. Surely? Secrets are as sacred as oaths ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

yes, just as sacred...i totally agree, em.
thanks so much for your visit and words,
j.
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

You know i try to be attentive and aware of your poetry.. have sp many to review before the year's o.. read more
Most people can't get it out in fear of scrutiny. Good stuff

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you, CLR9---
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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