goodbye kiss  ( a one word sonnet)

goodbye kiss ( a one word sonnet)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

goodbye kiss  ( a one word sonnet)

 

 

 

smack...

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/8/2020

© 2020 jacob erin-cilberto


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OUCH.....across the cheek, I am sure! Cute. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

thank you, Lydi...
can't be too serious all of the time.
Smacks of youth, life, time and usefulness.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

thank you, andrew,
j.
Sounds like a drug addict's final word, too. I love these serious poems, Jacob. ;)
N.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Norman,
j.
Could also be entitled, "Goodbye Slap."
Quite clever, Jacob; distilled minimalism.
Work that is, unquestionably, easy on the eyes.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Jimmy,
j.
A very nice piece, but I think you need to pare it down a bit.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

you are only about the 20th reviewer who has told me that...geez...I am working on it, okay???
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I'm calling the poetry police. This sonnet seems suspect! I like how "smack" can suggest a kiss or a slap (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

I'll go peacefully...I already have my pen up.
peace my friend.
j.
Goodbyes seldom are so beautiful.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

true...seldom...
thank you, Fairy
j.
That smacks of tenderness where roses bloom...
truly, Pat

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

kind of what i was feeling there, Pat.
yep, kinda was, it was.
j.
Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

‘Twas lovely to feel the Smack of tenderness. Violets will gather to bless you always.. truly, Pa.. read more
Cute. 😆
I don't know if it qualifies as poetry, but it made me happy lol

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Allie...
One of my colleagues in the English Department wrote a two word poem once.. read more
Allie Brumfield

3 Weeks Ago

That's cool... I've only known one other person that referred to them as Flutterbys, and she is long.. read more
guess it. gives
new meaning to
"parting is such
sweet sorrow"
or pain as the case may be
brief and to the point. :)



Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

yes, i guess it just wouldn't have been the same if Juliet said "Parting is such sweet Pain"--
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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