Poem
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
Poem
you gave me
a blank stare
so
i wrote on it.
erin-cilberto
9/28/2020
© 2020 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
I do no think you are ever empty, as for me my paper has been blank for sometime..need to follow your advise
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
if you look hard enough...you will see your words there on the page, waiting to be written.
t.. read more if you look hard enough...you will see your words there on the page, waiting to be written.
thank you, Cassie,
j.
Creating atmosphere,
if only to meet the limit.
the world was quiet,
the trees had stopped swaying with the breeze.
Given a slate,
blank of face,
I wondered...
after a moment,
I decided.
I should.
Flipping review limits...
Posted 3 Years Ago
Creating atmosphere,
if only to meet the limit.
the world was quiet,
the trees had stopped swaying with the breeze.
Given a slate,
blank of face,
I wondered...
after a moment,
I decided.
I should.
Flipping review limits...
3 Years Ago
i think you just wrote "Poem 2" with your review.
thank you, Jon,
j.
3 Years Ago
I admit I have problems with the review limits.
I did like the words!
Emptiness longs for filling
Posted 3 Years Ago
Emptiness longs for filling
3 Years Ago
thank you, paul,
nice to see you back around....it's been years.
j.
What Lydia said. Love this short piece and the hilarity of it. How DARE you stare at me! But not for long! Lol. Reminds me of one I wrote similar I'm sure you've read and commented on.
Posted 3 Years Ago
What Lydia said. Love this short piece and the hilarity of it. How DARE you stare at me! But not for long! Lol. Reminds me of one I wrote similar I'm sure you've read and commented on.
3 Years Ago
thank you, BlackRose,
j.
LOL Wonderful! Hey, anything that is blank deserves your words! Lydi**
Posted 3 Years Ago
LOL Wonderful! Hey, anything that is blank deserves your words! Lydi**
3 Years Ago
:))))))
thank you, Lydi...
It's so easy for you.... Even blank can be poetic.... Wow
Posted 3 Years Ago
It's so easy for you.... Even blank can be poetic.... Wow
3 Years Ago
thank you, Dreamer,
j.
Only poets can write on blank stares. Others might be charged with assault.
Posted 3 Years Ago
Only poets can write on blank stares. Others might be charged with assault.
3 Years Ago
you are too funny...thanks John.
j.
Nicely done my friend. I like it.
Posted 3 Years Ago
Nicely done my friend. I like it.
3 Years Ago
thank you, duff,
j.
Ah....Brilliant Jacob !!!
Posted 3 Years Ago
Ah....Brilliant Jacob !!!
3 Years Ago
thank you, Kira,
j.
3 Years Ago
Sometimes the simplest things have the biggest impact :)
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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