This poem makes think that you did not gave a valuable relationship with your father.. and looking back on this it is disturbing to you..that there was tension in the relationship and endeavors that did not produce positive vibes.. it seemed like he was venomous to you and remembering only hurts. ( this is my interpretation)! Best, Betty
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Oh wow, this is a very interesting perspective...
I am fascinated by how readers see things i.. read moreOh wow, this is a very interesting perspective...
I am fascinated by how readers see things in poetry.
I appreciate your words, Betty.
j.
3 Years Ago
A lot of times poems are just poems created from thoughts that come out of the air.
Actually .. read moreA lot of times poems are just poems created from thoughts that come out of the air.
Actually by dad and I were more than father and son, we were buddies as well...very close.
But many suffer from that relationship that is strained and it is so sad.
j.
My crazy comment! So glad it wasn’t your dad; glad you were buddies!!!
Best B
3 Years Ago
Jacob, please interpret the poem for me as you wrote it! Many thanks
3 Years Ago
Not crazy at all, an interpretation that fit very well.
I write open poetry.
and I app.. read moreNot crazy at all, an interpretation that fit very well.
I write open poetry.
and I appreciate your reviews.
j.
As you know, I have no feelings toward my dad, but I had a best friend who died about 5 years ago & his friendship was the big-brother vibe I crave. I still get a random pang (among dozens of warm fuzzies) when I remember something that went awry between us that I wished I'd been a big enuf person to own up to at the time (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
So sad when memories are like this; i too have them about my mother. At the time we do not see clearly maybe the whole picture but it leaves us often wondering "Why?"
I picked up specifically on the word tension. Maybe not always seeing eye to eye. Often our parents have their own ideas about where our future should be heading. Doesn:t work that way. That's where my thoughts went Jacob. Sad, but reality.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I am so pleased to see the different interpretations to this piece...means I was able to keep it ope.. read moreI am so pleased to see the different interpretations to this piece...means I was able to keep it open.
thank you Chris...
I really liked Betty's interpretation as well.
I learn more about my own work from what you guys tell me in reviews...or better yet, show me.
This poem makes think that you did not gave a valuable relationship with your father.. and looking back on this it is disturbing to you..that there was tension in the relationship and endeavors that did not produce positive vibes.. it seemed like he was venomous to you and remembering only hurts. ( this is my interpretation)! Best, Betty
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Oh wow, this is a very interesting perspective...
I am fascinated by how readers see things i.. read moreOh wow, this is a very interesting perspective...
I am fascinated by how readers see things in poetry.
I appreciate your words, Betty.
j.
3 Years Ago
A lot of times poems are just poems created from thoughts that come out of the air.
Actually .. read moreA lot of times poems are just poems created from thoughts that come out of the air.
Actually by dad and I were more than father and son, we were buddies as well...very close.
But many suffer from that relationship that is strained and it is so sad.
j.
My crazy comment! So glad it wasn’t your dad; glad you were buddies!!!
Best B
3 Years Ago
Jacob, please interpret the poem for me as you wrote it! Many thanks
3 Years Ago
Not crazy at all, an interpretation that fit very well.
I write open poetry.
and I app.. read moreNot crazy at all, an interpretation that fit very well.
I write open poetry.
and I appreciate your reviews.
j.
I feel ya j. It makes me feel intense, lots of memories just flooded me, shiver! It makes me want to know more but I can see this might not be something you would expand upon or maybe that’s just me projecting... yep just me.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
You are right...I am leaving it where it is, but you do understand, I am sure you do.
j.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..