Genius

Genius

 

 

 

I just thought of a great poetic line to describe 

my love for you

 

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 and it rhymes with

 

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it's the best I could do

 

well, at least it's "near rhyme."

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/13/2021

Reviews

[Neville]

....... whether running on flat or rhyming on flat, there is a rocky road ahead .. and remember, its a thin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ line between love n -------------------------- N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha ha....The Thin Red Line...well yes I am in some kind of war with myself...
thank you for the smile, Neville
j.

[Neville]

.... :)

[Einstein Noodle]

BRILLIANT ………..SIMPLY BRILLIANT! :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) gave me such a chuckle this morning Jacob .. one can't miss with flat line rhyming can we?! …...wishing you well my friend!…if its the best we can do … well…its the best then ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, E.
j.

[emmajoy]

You've set me homework for the day, sir.. think i need analyse the facts a little longer then go flat out to discover whether it's heart ruling head or the opposite in such an extraordinary interlude.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha..."flat out to discover"
you are so clever.
thank you for the smile, em.
j.

[emmajoy]

You're very welcome, j., smiles should be shared now and again. :)

[Patricia Wedel]

Your Title is quite endearing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...yes, quite the irony...I am so far from that.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Do I detect a trace of bitterness here? Is someone saying "Good riddance?"

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh could be...could have happened several times.
thanks, John,
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are clever even when you are romantic

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe that has been my problem.....
ha ha, thank you, Dale,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You made me smile. You romantic you :))

A stroke of genius. I'll second that.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...
j.

[Stella Armour]

how sensuous, you romantic man ....... ( says she running away as fast as she can ) lol.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wait, wait, Stella (as Brando would scream)
come back, Stella....
:))))

[Stella Armour]

https://youtu.be/U3CXLHLFvyM

Hahah.... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and Vivian Leigh...oscar winning performance and deservedly so.

[Paul Bell]

I think she'll be over the moon with this.
Okay, Jacob, I think she'll be over you soon.
Then again, a rhyme is a rhyme.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, over me soon is probably the best answer.
thank you, Paul.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the creativity of this poem sir Jacob. I like the literal and metaphorical lines you used. Genius indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sami...appreciate your kind words,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob...