Jurisdiction of feelings

Jurisdiction of feelings

 

 

sunsets abound

a different horizon

your voice the rising moon

my sadness a setting sun

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/19/2021

Reviews

[Dreamer Sima]

So much chaos and heart breaks are everywhere ( in the poetic land) still some manages to uplift the spirit but his sadness is covered with thick smog thus not letting a thin ray of hope to enter!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sima,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

This is like nature’s ringside each at opposite corners, each not connecting, each lost in their own transition or making. A tragedy of errors forces each to play their hand.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and not play them very well...thank you, andrew,
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

How can we read so much in just 4 lines, amazing hum?!
The reader can fell the emotions of the distance...
Truly Beautiful Jacob!!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Silmara,
j.

[Nix is typing...]

I feel like there's so much emotion in so few words!!! Such a beautiful poem, Jacob! I like the imagery you gave, the darkness of loneliness brightened by the sound of a single voice (As compared to the sun). Great poem, J! Thanks for sharing!!!

1000/100

Nix ❤️️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Nix,
j.

[AJNJ]

This poem leaves me in awe, its that beautiful! I pictured the sadness fading as the moon was rising, bringing light and hope.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, AJNJ,
j.

[🌹]

And just like the sun and moon, their feelings will never be on that same horizon. Reminds me of two people in a long distance relationship. There is something shared but never in reach. A touching write, Jacob. 🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Viktoria,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest words written Jacob. Life is twisting and falling. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, it is twisting and falling, isn't it?
thank you, Coyote...you have encouraged me with your kind reviews for many, many years now...and I really appreciate you.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes it is Jacob. The twist of fate. Do we control or are we free-falling? You are welcome my friend.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Utterly beautiful, but poignant too. I wonder who you were thinking about here? I know who I saw. That line

your voice the rising moon

a complete stunner. Wonderful brevity Jacob.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, her.
thank you, Chris, for your kind words,
j.

[m.s.early]

Two are joined in a single cycle. Balance.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your poetic reply is better than the poem...thank you, m.s.
j.

[barleygirl]

I love the juxtaposition of the rising moon & the setting sun . . . never saw a poem that summoned that marvel of opposition as well as this one does (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Margie...
j.