Discovery

Discovery

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto
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for Leslie P.

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Discovery

 

 


some mountains aloft

bodies lie in state, frozen

as time tears the soul

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/5/2021

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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This is so beautiful, Jacob, so much emotion displayed in so few words...I always enjoy reading you. :)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

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jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

Thank you, Nix,
j.
Nix Is Still Typing...

1 Week Ago

You're welcome, Jacob :)
Beautiful this is Jacob and written for Leslie who may have closure. That last line especially poignant, the double meaning of the word tears. That is one huge mountain of pain.

Chris

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jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

Yes he has faced this mountain twice now. Not fair when children precede parents in death. Leslie is.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

Yes, it is a terrible situation when you lose a child, yet regrettably it happens to many and they .. read more

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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