Discovery

for Leslie P.

Discovery

 

 

some mountains aloft

bodies lie in state, frozen

as time tears the soul

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/5/2021

Reviews

[Nix Is Still Typing...]

This is so beautiful, Jacob, so much emotion displayed in so few words...I always enjoy reading you. :)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Nix,
j.

[Nix Is Still Typing...]

You're welcome, Jacob :)

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Beautiful this is Jacob and written for Leslie who may have closure. That last line especially poignant, the double meaning of the word tears. That is one huge mountain of pain.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes he has faced this mountain twice now. Not fair when children precede parents in death. Leslie is such a wonderful poet. I have admired his work on this site for many years. My heart goes out to him.
j.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Yes, it is a terrible situation when you lose a child, yet regrettably it happens to many and they all have my sincere sympathy and condolences as they try to deal with this life changing event.