one thing leading to another

one thing leading to another

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

one thing leading to another

 

 

 

allow me to assault your fire

eyes plead with me to touch

the tip of your inflamed

skin with curious fingers

bleeding with needing

to crawl expansively delighted

to love you

with me.

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/21/21

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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bleeding with needing,

Can't help thinking Jacob, that is a great deal of needing here. A female on fire with her attraction.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

absolutely...thank you, Chris,
j.
This is amazing, much enjoyed

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Kerra,
j.
I liked the below lines Jacob.
"skin with curious fingers
bleeding with needing"
Hello from Michigan and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words,
j.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Jacob.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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