clerically sane, clinically insane  ( a six word romance novel)

clerically sane, clinically insane ( a six word romance novel)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

clerically sane, clinically insane

( a six word romance novel)

 

 

file my love away, forever yours...

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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And not a shade of grey! Nice one J.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you, andrew,
j.
Yes, agreeing with others, this is definitely a 500 page novel of the ilk of Dr Zhivago, do not what the law( the church) say, your love will forever will be hers and vise verse, no matter what the background ( war, peace, etc)
Only you could do this J
Amazing
Yours, B.



Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the kind words, Betty...Yes, it is a little bit too long isn't it...I will work on bre.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You are brevity!
I love the six word challenge. They are always power packed. Excellent work, you built a complete world in this one line.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Cherrie...you are very kind.
j.
Very nice use of words Jacob. Running love cannot be caught. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

yes it cannot be caught...thank you, Coyote...
j.
It's got to be Dr Zhivago. The wonderful Julie Christie and Omar Shariff. Seen it at least six times over the years. Every type of frustration and crazy thrown at the screen in the frozen backdrop of Russia with fur coats into the bargain. Tragic ending.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Interesting parallel...that would fit.
thank you, Chris,
j.
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I tried to make the poem as long as the movie...but fell a bit short.
Funny, I never even tho.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Month Ago

This is the bees knees when it comes to brevity. An epic in a nutshell :) Love it J.
This brings to mind the novel and movie "Doctor Zhivago" crazy love with hemostats

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

and it's almost as long as the film...:)))
thank you, Corset,
j.
I am going out on a limb and say this one is somewhat shorter than "War and Peace." The ending is happier, though.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

ha ha yes, by a page or two.
thank you for the smile, John,
j.
Jacob, you are prolific in your writings, my friend. Your muse truly does not give you a break. I am both envious and in awe of both the production and quality of your art. Continued success and inspiring others to do the same and speak their truth and aspirations in the art of words.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Carlos.
j.
Carlos L Estrada

1 Month Ago

you are very welcome, my friend. And for the record I would categorize myself clinically insane whe.. read more

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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