Partner

Partner

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Partner

 

 

 

a sudden song

 

breaks

 

           a groove inures itself

 

I don't hear a thing.

 

but I dance

 

                            I dance

 

 

two minutes of something in my nothing

 

                                        Happy Leaves ignite

 

the inferno 

 

the burn

 

feet move in my head

 

my feet?

 

                        or are you dancing with me again?

 

         like we did when you were a lyric

 

   that wrote me into

 

a sudden song.

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/4/21 

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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i like the uncovential syntax its almost like a dance in itself .Two minutes of something of nothing i like that line. Been seven odd years since
ive been on this site but you always encourged me on what was decnt. Some were trash.i write e short poems because im lazy


Posted 5 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Days Ago

thanks for your kind words, don't know, nice to see you back at WC.
j.
This is how disjointed & dislocated I would feel if possibly swept away by something as romantic as an unexpected invitation to dance. The romance wheels have seized up, I guess (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

Wheels up in ten.
thank you for your words, Margie.
j.
Autumn is a dance of lovers falling in colors of
lavender blue and golden hues of chrysanthemums
where emotions tumble in windy moments of sweet serenity.. .
the lyrics of a cherished memory where promises were Rings of Roses...



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

rings of roses that became....well.
thank you for your words, Pat,
j.
The final stanza here speaks to me. It forms pictures in my mind of fractured love. The partner is dancing with someone else it seems. Sometimes when we hear a song, an old song, it can transport us back in time. This is the feeling I got from this poem J.

Reflective nostalgia dipped in sadness.

Chris



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

ah if only it were easier to write "happy"---
thanks, sis Chris.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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