Reckless Abandon

Inspired by Fran's "Springtime Fantasy"

Reckless Abandon

lovely art

the shapes of words so sensual

the curvature of letters

in tandem with fingers

that write them between sheets

of allure

there is inert beauty

that is born to move

as themes whisper softly to each other

when the moon listens intently

to the love expressed

as bodies compose

lovely art

the poem begotten

gently

exposed

touched

the skin of syllables

when poems meet

an affair

read

savored

touched as

lovely art

demands.

erin-cilberto

1/9/22

Reviews

[DIVYA]

This poem takes one on such a journey of passion and romance! You write romance so beautifully, Jacob.... Fran must be overjoyed reading this poem!...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, DIVYA....that is kind of you as I don't write much romance.
j.

[DIVYA]

You're mist welcome :)

[Robert Trakofler]

you never cease to amaze me... simply beautiful lines!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you brother Bunny...
j.

[Weeping willow]

The art of words forms, painting a story and expels the darkness within. creating light ;-]

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your poetic reply, willow,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

The Art of embracing a Heart is sensually painted with
Sunset's Caress where feelings fade into dreams come true. tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you have such a poet's heart, thank you, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you for your kindness… Jacob…
Truly, Pat

[Ada]

Very creative piece on how the meeting of poems become the meeting of people or bodies. Nice metaphor.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ada,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

When two letters met at the end of the page they entwined with a twist of your hand a grin on your face

Just my take on you

Loved it Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you caught me, Julie.
thanks,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Lol have a good night there
Just letting you know you’re the first poet I read when I go on site

[Patricia]

the only thing that could possibly make this better is seeing it in your own handwriting!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Patricia,
j.

[Patricia]

you're welcome j.

[M. J. Smith]

Lovely words, Jacob. You create such beautiful images. A heartfelt tribute to our craft.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, M.J.
j.

[keith]

refreshed offering not bathed in loss.
your expressiveness is unlimited for your talents exceed even your own visions
keep it up jacob ... you may well be a poet one day! HA!
until then keep your paper dry your ink smooth and your talent for capturing words in magnificent order!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review ABG,
j.