Obituary

Obituary

 

 

 

the laughing boy

lustfully absorbed pain

for his pen's sake

 

then age struck down

his ink riddled body

and he collapsed upon his page

 

still laughing

but now in duplicity

a carbon copy of himself.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/20/22

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

As poets our words will outlive us making us immortal in theory.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that, Dale...."immortal in theory"---
thanks for the smile,
j.

[Temperance]

What shall we leave behind when we move on to other planes? Your ink has left an indelible mark upon the world of poetry. That is your legacy. Where do you come up with this stuff J? Fascinating it is! I'm always eager to see what your next post will be. Temp

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Temp.
to tell you the truth, I have no idea where the poems come from...I feel more like a conduit than a poet...
j.

[LJW]

Leaving his proverbial mark on the world...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, LJW,
j.

[Patricia]

As does the girl…gripping the ages, gripping words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Patricia,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

As we Age we can Watercolor the pages into a Sea of Coral Reefs where we can Scuba Dive and transform ourself to be whatever we Dream… Mermaids 🧜‍♀️ are waiting for Thee. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah you are so poetic, even in your reviews...wonderful.
thank you, Pat,
j.