articulation

articulation

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

articulation

 

 

 

 

a tryst

with academia

a passion for knowledge

 

in secret

others see a flagrant

disregard

 

the ramification

poetry is born

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/8/22

© 2022 jacob erin-cilberto


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If you are going to know the river I'd suggest you get wet, then study the slow music it provides inside your heart. The sky only has so many names and yet the poet can take hold and give it a billion more..." that gate of providence that weeps for reasons unknown" and so it goes. Knowledge of the heart and a solid love for the flame in darkness. "A child's hand fresh from the mud of war"...do not go so deeply into the cranial when reaching into the fires of emotion. Thanks for sharing J~ always a deeper walk and ponderance beyond your structures!

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

nothing like that slow music...thank you, Perdition,
j.
Are we to blame as poets for the interpretation taken by a reader when their opinion differs from our own? You've peaked my curiosity with this one, J!

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I feel poetry is often born from thinking outside the box of academia...rebelling...
and no.... read more
A passion for knowledge is fine. Poetry without passion is missing a trick. A little brevity and I’m not sure my thoughts were along the lines of your own thinking here J.

Chris


Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I appreciate your thoughts, Chris,
j.
So true. Art, whether poetry or other form does require a sensitivity that is a secret that others may see as a disregard for the scientific formula for truth. Well said in so few words.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I agree, Soren...thank you for your insight.
j.
A tryst for passion…. The secrets within … begin the Beguine… the Music 🎶 of Mozart with 💜 Heart and Soul… gently, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

yes, time to begin...thank you, Pat,
j.
When others don't share our vision or see what we see, there are ramifications, not always discord but sometimes for something better. To me it doesn't always matter what others see. I'm used to being misunderstood and I just enjoy doing my thing, my way.
An interesting poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I find that too...DIVYA....
I do the Fleetwood Mac thing..."Go your own way"

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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