revision's vision's vacated

revision's vision's vacated

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

revision's vision's vacated

 

 

rogue-writer writes, wrangles

wrests words wily

willingly wastes no time

traveling back over and over

to those same wily wrested words

 

once owned for the few seconds

of second looks longingly laid

to rest wrested words wrangled

willingly

will once written remain

untouched rogues like

the vagabond poet who posted them.

 

erin-cilberto

5/19/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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Tremendous alliteration and capturing the wild spirit. Well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Thomas,
j.
dear Jacob.. have you ever read the Poem “Vagabond House? It is unforgettable.. as are You. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

No, but will have to look for it.
thank you, Pat,
j.
Loved this wordplay and alliteration dear Jacob!
Words are wily, wrested, wrangled and so much more!

untouched rogues like
the vagabond poet who posted them.

These untouched rogues can be such amazing fun!

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind review, Divya,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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