Haiku # 875
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
Haiku # 875
the Black-eyed Susans
suspect winter is arriving
curl into themselves
erin-cilberto
10/29/24
© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
This is one amazing write, I love Haiku's but dislike winter.
Wonderful writing here
Posted 6 Days Ago
6 Days Ago
Winter kills so many living things, including people.
Thank you, Writergurl.
j.
Lovely and seasonal. I could say more because I have to.
Posted 6 Days Ago
Lovely and seasonal. I could say more because I have to.
6 Days Ago
Thank you, Ken.
And I always like your "more."
Love the perfectly used seasonal aspect of the haiku. Well done. ~Jim
Posted 6 Days Ago
Love the perfectly used seasonal aspect of the haiku. Well done. ~Jim
6 Days Ago
Thank you, Jim,
j.
Can be a good indicator.
It is amazing how creatures and plants sense season's change.
Enjoyed!
Posted 6 Days Ago
Can be a good indicator.
It is amazing how creatures and plants sense season's change.
Enjoyed!
6 Days Ago
Yes, it is, Sami...yes it is.
j.
6 Days Ago
Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome sir Jacob
Winter approaches, it time to get cold,
very good
Posted 6 Days Ago
Winter approaches, it time to get cold,
very good
6 Days Ago
Thank you, tumi,
j.
The frost is resting ... where Sun was once on Pumpkins... Jack O Lanterns smile... as ever, Pat
Posted 6 Days Ago
The frost is resting ... where Sun was once on Pumpkins... Jack O Lanterns smile... as ever, Pat
6 Days Ago
and they have great smiles, thank you, Pat,
j.
.. and so they do, self-protecting and shyly as many do when needing! Charming truth, jacob
Posted 6 Days Ago
.. and so they do, self-protecting and shyly as many do when needing! Charming truth, jacob
6 Days Ago
I love Black-eyed Susans....they remind me of Vermont.
thank you, em,
j.
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Added on October 31, 2024
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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