Haiku # 875

Haiku # 875

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Haiku # 875

 

 

the Black-eyed Susans

suspect winter is arriving

curl into themselves

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/29/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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This is one amazing write, I love Haiku's but dislike winter.
Wonderful writing here

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

Winter kills so many living things, including people.
Thank you, Writergurl.
j.
Lovely and seasonal. I could say more because I have to.

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

Thank you, Ken.
And I always like your "more."
Love the perfectly used seasonal aspect of the haiku. Well done. ~Jim

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

Thank you, Jim,
j.
Can be a good indicator.
It is amazing how creatures and plants sense season's change.
Enjoyed!

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

Yes, it is, Sami...yes it is.
j.
Sami Khalil

6 Days Ago

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome sir Jacob
Winter approaches, it time to get cold,
very good

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

Thank you, tumi,
j.
The frost is resting ... where Sun was once on Pumpkins... Jack O Lanterns smile... as ever, Pat

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

and they have great smiles, thank you, Pat,
j.
.. and so they do, self-protecting and shyly as many do when needing! Charming truth, jacob

Posted 6 Days Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

I love Black-eyed Susans....they remind me of Vermont.
thank you, em,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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