My attention span these days isn’t good when it comes to long and drawn out poetry. Too wordy and I find it a turn off. I want to remain awake. There was humour here, as well J.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Thanks Chris....
I know most of mine are excrutiatingly long...I will try to be more concise .. read moreThanks Chris....
I know most of mine are excrutiatingly long...I will try to be more concise in future. thanks for the reading...and your words.
:)))
j.
I like this. I often find myself shredding those poems of mine that are way too wordy, as they usually are so because the message was lost before I left the first verse. ~Jim
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
yes, sometimes we have to go to lost and found to get that message back. Thank you, Jim.
My favouring of shorter poems has absolutely nothing to do with disliking longer form poetry, but by the time I get to the third verse, I run into a wall of forgetlyness and distactiialation. So much so that I even forget what I should be doing and go for a nap to think about what I have forgotten and next thing you know the police are at the door wondering why you didn't pick the kids up from school and they request you come with them, not for being arrested but the kids mother has issued threats on your life!
Oh, and could you bring me one of those viennese swirly cakes too with my mochafrappalattecino please waiter? 😃
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Depends if the tip is big enough!
Thank you, Lorry.
j.
I'm thankful for this as I nod off after my 5 lines. Never could write longer than.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Sapphus....my attention span will never let me finish a novel....for sure. I tried four o.. read moreThank you, Sapphus....my attention span will never let me finish a novel....for sure. I tried four of them.
dear Jacob... a Blanket on a chilly night will bring Comfort to the lonely Heart. The warmth of a Kindred Soul that touches the boundaries of a Starry Sky will always bring a Full Moon of peace and goodwill. tenderly... Pat
This is great, Jacob. I love the dry humor. The irony that this poem deriding long poems is itself a longish poem. Especially for your style. The need to know what we want to say as writers (what we want to say not what we want others to hear) is an integral part of writing a poem. Sometimes a few words can fill an ocean’s worth of emotion. Then again, some times we just need a beefy Eliot or Whitman poem to speak to a generation. Poetry has so many beautiful faces. I enjoyed this.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
I like that, "beefy"....and yes, so many beautiful faces.
thank you, Eilis...and it is so goo.. read moreI like that, "beefy"....and yes, so many beautiful faces.
thank you, Eilis...and it is so good to see you around here again,
j.
I certainly hope a lot of people on the site read this one, especially those who write long poems about their relationships. You can say how great or how sorry your lover is in ten verses, but that's just the start for some of them.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Yes, that is true....long does not make it good or readable....and often too much is expressed in ve.. read moreYes, that is true....long does not make it good or readable....and often too much is expressed in very long poems...thanks, John.
j.
"the poet needled
for nodding off
while still writing"
one of the virtues (if that is the right word to use) of haiku, senryu, or cinquain, is that with very few words, a whole world is seen. Like the world of the frog and lily pad in Basho's famous haiku.
Of course some would argue that there were some really good "long poems", like the epic poems: 'The Iliad", 'Gilgamesh', 'Beowulf', 'Dante's Inferno', or more recently, 'The Wasteland'.
For me, it doesn't matter, long, long or short, either can be boring and you need a LOT of STIMULANTS to get through them.
Curt
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
stimulants...Amen.
thank you, Curt...
november is the cruelest month...oh wait, that i.. read morestimulants...Amen.
thank you, Curt...
november is the cruelest month...oh wait, that is April....oops.
1 Month Ago
november to april, Jacob you must have used a lot of stimulants for this thought... lol ;0)
This is honestly speaking about the facts. Although I am not very known to poetry, I still think alot before using even a single word for my poems. I sometimes wonder, whether the reader will even understand what the poetry is trying to say or whether it even brings any interest in them to read my poems. But eventually, I have learnt alot from writing and I find it very comforting when I am writing about a certain topic.
Well anyways, I loved your poem.✨️✨️
😁
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..