Senryu #914

Senryu # 914

 

 

one poem loves another

articulated design

in fluent embrace

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/20/25

Reviews

[Belle]

It is beautiful in its simplicity, making the act of writing feel like a shared, loving exchange. It is almost as if you are inviting me to feel how the poem embraces its own creation.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Perhaps the poet is doing that. Thank you, Belle.

[Chris Shaw]

A love poem for poets. You say so much here about poetry J. Wonderful piece.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris.
j.

[redzone]

now this is a love poem, designed and articulated and that embrace... in the words of our friend Sami K, "wowzer"!!!!
-Curt

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Curt.
j.

[Patricia]

that is poetry for you, one piece to another, one artist to another, one muse to another connecting us all. brilliant writing, I do envy your ability to write the senryu and haiku, absolutely smacked down by your ability.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for the kind words, I feel pretty raw when it comes to form.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

The personification is wonderful. I want to be inside your brain! I think you eat, sleep, and laugh poetry! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Mostly laugh...thank you, Lydi.
j.

[Amy R]

Lovely, it reflects the interplay between artistic expression and emotional resonance, emphasizing how one piece of art can inspire or reflect the feelings of another.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Amy.
j.

[Amy R]

You're welcomee

[MCS]

Brilliant my friend, and enjoyed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Mary.
j.