Notice Me?

Notice Me?

A Poem by Erin
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song lyrics..again

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He never notices the girl

With her hair tied up in a bun

He never notices the girl

With no make-up on

He never notices the girl

With the converse tennis shoes

She’s just an average girl

Hoping that you’ll notice her

Looking at you with her watchful eyes

But you, you are just so oblivious

You’ll never know that all she wants

Is to have your attention for a little while

Notice me?

Notice the girl who spends every waking moment

Thinking of you, and thinking of what could be

Notice me?

Notice the girl who adores you and

Just wishes to have your arm around her

Notice me?

Notice the girl who just wants to spend more time with you

And has loved you from day one

If you acknowledge her presence

Just for a minute, she is the happiest girl for days

But you will never know this

As you babble on about basketball,

She listens intently, soaking in every moment, every word

Because she doesn’t know when you’ll talk to her again

And as she talks to you, all she wants to do is yell

“I’m in love with you” but you will never know

Because you are just one of the many clueless boys

Who just doesn’t pay attention to girls like her, girls like me

Notice me?

Notice the girl who spends every waking moment

Thinking of you, and thinking of what could be

Notice me?

Notice the girl who adores you and

Just wishes to have your arm around her

Notice me?

Notice the girl who just wants to spend more time with you

And has loved you from day one

She doodles your name on her paper

As she daydreams of fairytales and

Of you, sweeping her off of her feet

And falling in deeply in love

But reality smacks her in the face

When she realizes that this is just high school

And that this isn’t Disney; there aren’t any princesses and princes here

He never notices her

Even if she speeds up in the hallway,

Just to walk next to you

He never notices her

Even if she sends all the signs

That are just screaming “I love you”

He would never notice her

Not even if she were to whisper “I love you”

© 2011 Erin


Author's Note

Erin
ehhh i think i might come off a bit strong..?

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You say it might come off a bit strong but, it seems to me to an exact picture of what it is like to not be notice by the one you love the most. Especially in high school.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great job! getting your massage across, leaving nothing out. The only thing that’s strong is the feelings you have for that person.



Posted 8 Years Ago



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