Broken Parts

Broken Parts

A Poem by Hannah Messer

Poem about self discovery, love, and separation.

Broken promises and broken hearts.
How can we fix the broken parts?
Our love is awkward,
the truth confused,
we're beaten down and so abused.
To start to heal,
we must forgive,
and trust ourselves,
and learn to live.
I'm here for you,
and you for me,
but in the end,
it's I,
not we.
We'll search our souls to find our power,
lest we get lost this witching hour.
Once we've discovered who we are,
we'll find we've fixed the broken parts.

© 2015 Hannah Messer

Author's Note

Hannah Messer
I wasn't entirely sure how to break this up so I'm not sure it flows right this way, but I tried!

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It flows alright! I like how its so connected - start to finish - this is actually something I can relate to very well

Posted 5 Years Ago

This is a simple yet beautifully written poem which I found tells a story... so short yet complete... I love it. ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago

Hi Hannah, its really nice. Good job Gal !!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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actually, this was kind of uplifting. I like this a lot, great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love this! Very well-written and I think the words flowed beautifully together to show the emotion. Great job! keep it up! :D 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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5 Reviews
Added on December 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 24, 2015
Tags: broken, parts, love, separation, discovery


Hannah Messer
Hannah Messer

Pittsburgh, PA