Forever

Forever

A Poem by Hannah Messer
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short poem about my views on forever and the problems it creates.

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Forever;

Impossible to achieve,
I wanted desperately to believe,
But to do so was only naive,
I hated watching you turn to leave,
And now your loss is mine to grieve,
Forever...

© 2015 Hannah Messer


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Nice rhyme and meter, and to cover such a broad topic as FOREVER in so few words and express yourself so masterfully is a show of your writing talents. Thank you for posting and allowing us the pleasure of reading your work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Added on June 24, 2015
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