Nostalgia

Nostalgia

A Poem by Alyss Erulisse
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I lived in a trailer with my parents until I was two, and I was happy. Then, we built a house in front. My parents now see the trailer as little more than an eyesore and a storage place.

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Walking through the trailer

Remembering the warmth of happy memories

Missing that simple happiness

Thinking of the long life that followed

Wondering where it went wrong

When did the loneliness creep in?

Could anything have been done?

This place was a shelter

Now it is dank and shadowed

Dusty and crowded

A limbo for idle possessions

A space to cover up

© 2014 Alyss Erulisse


Author's Note

Alyss Erulisse
I wasn't sure what to do about punctuation.

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i like it Allison.. memories about the place we have spent our childhood are always wonderful n its always sad to know that today they are no more that wonderful place that they used to be for sum reason.. thanks for sharing your memories :)

Raj

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it, it's nice to look back to our happy memories but it can also be a little saddening. You remember those memories even though you were around two?

Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alyss Erulisse

9 Years Ago

Most of my memory from that time is supplemented by home video and family pictures.
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

9 Years Ago

Oh lol yeah that's understandable xD I thought wow you must have a great memory lol

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Added on July 31, 2014
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Tags: nostalgia, memory, lonely, shelter, childhood

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Alyss Erulisse
Alyss Erulisse

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Writing is my passion, but I am always looking for new ways to bring my stories to life. I am an individual with a multitude of creative interests. Favorite Pastimes: ballet, painting, reading,.. more..

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