Blessed be the moon!

Blessed be the moon!

A Poem by Esteban Morfín
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and her fair light

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Blessed be the moon and her fair light!
She brings out our true self at plain sight
She makes the mind and the heart fight
For when she comes out, wrong becomes right

In daylight reason acts as supreme commander
At night only to the moon must all surrender
The vile become their vilest
The good become their best

It is only at night that hearts come out shining
Too bad we must spend that time sleeping
Or so they keep saying to me
But I promise I'll break free

Blessed be the moon and her fair light!
She brings out love and pain at plain sight
She shines for everyone with all her might
She shines for everyone all of the night

I'll live the night wide awake
So that when moon sends me inspiration
My hand is ready for the take
I care not for the start nor the destination

I know if she guides me I'll be fine
Even if she leads me to madness
I'll always be hers and she'll be mine
We'll be one in the darkness

Blessed be the moon and her fair light!
So great beauty, such a pure white
Blessed are we that pledge as her knights
She will take us to ever greater heights

© 2020 Esteban Morfín


Author's Note

Esteban Morfín
I love staying up late watching at the moon.

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I definitely appreciate a full moon on a clear night but I am really not a night guy, in fact, because of health reasons I sleep by myself and leave the light on all night to get a decent sleep
Weird things happen to the old bod as you age
I'm sure you will learn to enjoy it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I definitely appreciate a full moon on a clear night but I am really not a night guy, in fact, because of health reasons I sleep by myself and leave the light on all night to get a decent sleep
Weird things happen to the old bod as you age
I'm sure you will learn to enjoy it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful work. I love the moon. We both have many secrets. The moon is seen in most cultures to a feminine symbol, so we are both women and divine.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Too bad we must spend that time sleeping"... As a doctor, I'll have to disagree with that. It's really good you get to keep your nights for sleep lol.
This sounds like a neat little lullaby poem. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esteban Morfín

3 Years Ago

Haha, yes, a shame biology made it that way. Thanks for reading!
This resonates with me. I always feel like I do my best thinking, my best work at night. Shame we have to find time for sleep so much could be done in that time.
”Too bad we must spent that time sleeping
Or so they keep saying to me
But I promise I'll break free"
Great line

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esteban Morfín

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it! I'm already working hard to become my own boss so that I can use more of the .. read more
I'm confused, is it a personification or a metaphor?
Still a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esteban Morfín

3 Years Ago

Why not both? Thank you for reading!
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This is so lovely, I enjoyed this. Love looking at the moon.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the poem, I'm a moon watcher too. Nice work. Flows smooth.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Esteban Morfín

3 Years Ago

thanks a lot!

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Added on May 31, 2020
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Tags: moon, poetry, romantic

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Esteban Morfín
Esteban Morfín

México, Estado de México, Mexico



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Hello there! My name is Esteban. I am a Mexican young man with a passion for writing. In the long term, I want to dedicate full-time to writing. I've been writing short stories and novels pretty.. more..

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