You and I

You and I

A Poem by Liz
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How did we happen? You and I. 
For the longest time we were
strangers passing by.

While my thoughts were swirling
in countless fantasies wondering
with whom I'm meant to be. 
You already had your brown eyes
set on me.

One conversation led to another
and closer friends we became. 
I never thought my lips would smile
when they spoke your name. 

Friends is all I ever thought we'd be.
My life changed when 
You and I became We.

© 2010 Liz


Author's Note

Liz
Something quick. Decided to write something with that special someone on my mind :)

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Aww, this is so cute! I love how simple and fairy-tale like this is, and how there seem to be multiple layers of emotions and secrets hidden beneath what is told within the poem. I could relate to this piece 100%, and I think that you've written this in a way that makes it accessible and relatable to everyone who reads this. The last stanza is perfectly adorable. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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AW! It's soo cute! I loved the thought of the feelingg... the feeling of possibility... eh, not sure if that was an excellent description, but I'm hoping you get that I liked it! xD lol It really was nice! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this is so cute! I love how simple and fairy-tale like this is, and how there seem to be multiple layers of emotions and secrets hidden beneath what is told within the poem. I could relate to this piece 100%, and I think that you've written this in a way that makes it accessible and relatable to everyone who reads this. The last stanza is perfectly adorable. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet! Sounds like a nice card.......

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats sweet, and written well.
Id love to see more like this, the emotion behind this is obviouse.
It makes your writting more colourfull.
Good Work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Got to love beautiful brown eyes, and feel lucky if we are loved by them.

Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. I love it when friends become more.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely expression of the progression of love

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 21, 2010
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I'm Elizabeth I'm 18 years old and life is good ♥ I'm in love with the most amazing man ever; We said "I do" on August 26th, 2011 ♥ Simplicity and love is what pulses through.. more..

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