Fallen!

Fallen!

A Poem by Atheana Kylee-S. C.

Fire, smoke, ashes,

Dead bodies, rubbish,

 

All these things (and more), are seen

This building once stood so tall

 

It would hurt your neck,

just to look all the way up

 

Many people died,

Many people cried

 

The smoke was very thick, and unbreathable

IF you survived you were lucky

 

Everything was turned into ashe

Other areas would damaged as well

 

Such a terrible crime

Murdered millions

 

In the ashes I found

A little piece of hope

 

That piece of hope

Well give us the strength,

to move on

 

 

© 2010 Atheana Kylee-S. C.


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Call it "Fallen"! nice poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


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