Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Ethan
"

My first haiku...

"

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

© 2017 Ethan


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nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Thanks you!



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few words a lot of meaning nice haiku Ethan
thank you for sharing

Posted 4 Months Ago


Positively outstanding. Bravo!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Perfect!!! So much meaning in just a few short words. Amazing

Posted 1 Year Ago


very very nicely written thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Well done! I love how versatile you are with your writing! Love this piece! Tabby

Posted 2 Years Ago


Who will watch us at night?

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love it! Very good for your first Haiku.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Thanks Zeldablue
Short and simple but also elegant and fascinating!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!
Good job. Short and sweet, just how I like 'em.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Hahaha thanks
nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Thanks you!

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