Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Ethan
"

My first haiku...

"

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

© 2017 Ethan


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nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks you!



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Oh....it's a good one. I liked it, not much like your other poems, but I did liked it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Very true, I'm trying to refine my abilities. Thanks for the review!
Anjali

3 Years Ago

You are welcome!
That's really nice ..very good haiku

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you. Great profile picture as well xD
Farhan Shaikh

3 Years Ago

Oh thanx☺ .
Nice one for a first try...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks Najam
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

you're welcome.
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If indeed there is a God he has been sleeping for a very long time, and when not sleeping it seems he sits on his hands.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Haha this was in no way a commentary on religion. Just a poem from the eye of a child. Regardless, t.. read more
Wow! This is lovely..I loved it so much..It's really magical and beautiful... thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks Sofia :)
Sofia

3 Years Ago

Most welcome :)
or he has failed to pay his electric bill!

this is quite perfect, actually.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Haha thank you :)
Very worthy Ethan. So good to read your different forms and all done so very well. I think this more senyru than haiku?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Haha yes you're right. I wasn't even aware that senyrus existed. Thanks anyway :)
i love this!! well done ethan!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks :)))))
(applauds) Brilliant job!!! :D GOOOOOOOOO ETHAN!!!!!!! :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks as always Raven :)
sounds like a lonely place

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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Indeed :PP

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Added on June 30, 2017
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