Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Ethan
"

My first haiku...

"

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

© 2017 Ethan


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nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks you!



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Lovely sweet pure I love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)))
Such a dreamy, sensational and beautiful haiku Ethan!
Well done my friend, keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you man
Mr.Writer

3 Years Ago

No problem :)
Perfect Haiku and adorable idea! Lovely imagery Yes, I guess he needs his sleep!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks :) Always nice to hear from you Annette
This was a really nice haiku. You made the sky feel like home to a Deity or a supernatural Being. When the lights are shut. He must be sleeping. Leaving the world to itself. Nicely penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much :P
Good haiku, and it's your first one. It makes multiple scenarios play out in my head so well done! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks Damien :)

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