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Darling Fair

Darling Fair

A Poem by Ethan

Darling fair, with bright and golden hair,

If you were mortal, I would never know.

A perfect, fallen angel you must be.

 

So, you heav’nly cherub; please stay true.

For though you often tell me you are mine,

I tend to forget it a lot of the time.

© 2017 Ethan


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If here reviews could be a single word,
My single word for this would then be: WOW!

Well done!!
(For sound purposes, I'd suggest to move "often" to before "tell me" rather than leave it after.....and I was going to say something about the last line being a bit wonky in regards to the musicality, but the way the musicality flows, I can say it kind of works.... veering from the set rhythm to end in style and the bang that is the line!)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

3 Years Ago

not at all. It's reads perfectly. You just need to remember to breathe in between "it" and "a" to re.. read more
Ethan

3 Years Ago

Oh okay, thank you very much :)
emipoemi

3 Years Ago

always with pleasure.



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I love this poam so sweet and adorable every girl loves to hear these words

Posted 1 Year Ago


As other commenters have suggested I wish I could say GREAT. This just sums things up, short, snappy...interesting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Such a sweet poem. I would love to hear that being said to me :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the ending, and love how this written! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS ONE! Sweet, creative!!
I'm loving your style! Well penned!
Tabby

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Ah, thank you very much Tabby :)
I adore your poems a lot!
Your works stand out in quality and language.
This too is great!
Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks Neetha
I enjoy the balance of some rhyme but not too much rhyme. I hope that makes sense.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

It does and is appreciated. Thank you
Speechless, that is how I was left. Beautiful piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Aw, that's a really sweet poem. I really can't think of anything else to say but that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thanks!! :)
This sounds like something I would read in a novel somewhere. I really like it.

~Luna

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much

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Added on July 1, 2017
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