A Predestined Earth

When the sun blew up and the Earth was destroyed what will happen.

A Predestined Earth

By ★ Starry

When the sun, the moon, and the Earth is gone,

who will remember us?

Ourselves I doubt will remember us.

Maybe someday an alien race will look

for us and find us gone.

Maybe for years they watched

approved of us or disagreed

Our ego and greediness have shared a part in our lives,

and they sat there watching us through our lives..

They'll find rubble and rubble of rock.

But each rubble is important.

That one rubble belonged to church girl.

This rubble is when she first kissed her husband.

Lastly that rubble is when she died on that fateful day.

But they'll never know that,

not even ourselves. 

Reviews

[Zeph]

I think this alien matter if pretty interesting. If the universe is neverending, then there must be another planet harbouring life, other civilizations similar to ours. :)

Excellent writing, read it through like five times. It's nothing like the poems I usually see. Keep up the good work ~

[★ Starry]

Thank you :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

END OF THE WORLD...ALIEN BEINGS AND THE RUBBLE OF A RELATIONSHIP FOUND IN THE WHOLE MESS OF THINGS ON THAT LAST DAY...IS WHAT I ASSUME YOUR PORTRAYING HERE IN THE VERSE...MAY THEY FIND US INTERESTING AS WHEN WE WERE HERE AS A CIVILIZATION...

[★ Starry]

..... excuse when I ask this, my mind is a little slow right now, what do you mean?

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I'M JUST TRYING TO CONVEY YOUR WORDS...THAT'S ALL...

[★ Starry]

Okay it's fast again, I know what you mean :>