I Vow - Love Tenderness

I Vow - Love Tenderness

A Poem by Eve Ola
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Vows that I always keep !!

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I Vow - Love Tenderness

I vow,
To love you always,
To be at your side when needed
To be a part of your sadness &
To be your happiness always

I vow,
To be your true companion
To be a true daughter for a family
To be a true friend with tenderness &
To be your pleasing rest place

I vow,
To adore you like a baby
To hug you when there's fall
To support you at your peak &
To love you more of all

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak

I vow,
To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola


© 2014 Eve Ola


Author's Note

Eve Ola
May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.

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Great poem :) It was very touching!
I really enjoyed this.

My favorite words were;
"I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!"

Thank you for the lovely poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks Lacie I do appreciate your words :)
Lacie Blackwood

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak. Beautiful words......:) love is truly powerful and to sustain it;commitment,loyalty,truthfulness,and compassion is required.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the time and read :)
a very intriguing poem
i like the ways you've presented love.
May i ask if you can review my chapter one official?
Cheers

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks man
I have read a few of your wrtings now and I start to create a concept. You seem to like the concept of repetition. Inviting the reader in a quasi mantra state. It is effective I agree but as it bounds it also restricts. So here is what happened to me. I read it, and how could I disagree with your words ? It would be foolish and I wouldn't disagree either with 1 Corinthians 13:4-8 Love is patient, Love is kind.... but the mantra effect becomes tiring as if wanting to take the individuality of the writer and replace it for repetition.

Strange I know maybe is just me, proabably is all just me

Thankyou for the invite

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

ooopss sorry for making u feel tiring. but by chance you read similar style of my poetry. i have var.. read more
Rene Salinas

9 Years Ago

You missunderstood me is not that what you wrote made me tired at all is that the form you choose ha.. read more
"To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven"
These words just took me down with grace.... an uncompromising love is the best.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Wow thanks again man :)
I swear i loved this.. "fiercely loving somebody in all their form"- that line made shivers run down my body.it is very rarely that you will get such a person.. You have vowed may god bless you to keep it ;)

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

your words are blessing for me Sophy Thanks a lot and keep reviewing :)
Wow!!! Really heart-felt. True devotion to someone, through everything, is a very rare and amirable thing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks Steve it means a lot :)
This is truly touching and couldn't have been stated more beautifully. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jennie it means a lot :)

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